Thursday, May 14, 2020

Week #33 - Georgia

As I was walking along thinking about my lost sister who went missing a couple of weeks ago, I then stumbled across this old abandoned house. I decided to have a look inside. I grabbed a rock and smashed it against the window. The window then shattered into a million pieces. I climbed through. As soon as I had my whole body inside, the window closed up and there was no chance of escaping. I looked around everywhere and then I heard this deafening scream that echoed through the cold night. I stumbled into this locked room. I was trapped.

1 comment:

  1. There is so much going on in your story, Georgia! I was expecting you to find your lost sister in the abandoned house, but instead you have become trapped yourself. I like the way you describe the windows shattering into a million pieces, that is very vivid. ‘Stumbled’ is a good word too. No wonder you ended up trapped!

    Janet Team 100WC

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