Thursday, May 21, 2020

Week #34 - Catie

Grace ran into her room. Her eyes fixed on a rustic chair, Directly in the centre of the room with a beaten box on top. She approached the strange chair and softly lifted it up. Suspiciously Grace knelt down next to it not leaving sight on the box. Beforing opening it she took a deep breath and glimpsed out the window at the daunting sky only to see one single leaf sliding down the window. Carefully she opened the box and let out a terrified shriek. The last thing she saw was a racoon with petrifying eyes leaping at her.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Catie
    Your 100WC had a sense of suspense - I did not expect the raccoon at the end! You have used some wonderful vocabulary to describe things. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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