Amelia 22.5.21

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 Hi I'm Emma Smith and not going to lie, I hate my parents with passion. They didn’t let my friends come for the night because my crazy nana is staying the night with us. I was just going to have like ten friends over. I was listening to my favorite song savage love as nana came up and closed the door and gave me a teddy. I fell asleep instantly. When I woke up I saw a flash of light, then darkness. I could hear my mum crying and dad slamming doors and  nana said it will be over soon….

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  1. Xuerong HuangMay 30, 2021 at 9:09 AM

    Hi Amelia,

    Thank you for your post. I'm glad that I can read your story, which is narrative and very special. I think there may be something wrong with the family relations of the narrator. But I hope Emma can find a way to cope with it. Well done! Keep writing.

    Xuerong Huang (Team 100wc)

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