Ally - Week 8

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 I had been waiting for 2 weeks to go on our car trip. The day had finally come. We were packing our bags and Dad was getting the vehicle ready.  We left at 12:30 and were going to arrive at about 2:30. The music was slowly playing as almost everyone in the car was asleep. When we arrived at our campsite I climbed out of the car with my furry jacket on. I was so happy that we arrived at our campsite, after I had been waiting for two long weeks. I fell asleep quickly in my bed.

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  1. Michelle Team 100WCJune 28, 2021 at 12:21 AM

    Ally,
    Great use of the prompt words. You incorporated them seamlessly into your story, which had a clear beginning, middle and end. Well done!
    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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