Chloe - 4/6/21

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We had arrived. We were down at the beach on a still sunny day, it was stunning. I went down towards the water as I was already getting bored. I picked up a stone and threw it into the water and to my surprise I spotted something swimming in the water. “What is it?” my sister whispered to me. “I don’t know,” I whispered back. “Wait, is that a fish!” my sister yelled. “Mum come here”. Suddenly the fish came shooting up towards the sky then it started flying in the air! “I didn’t realise they could fly!” I said.

Comments

  1. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:13 PM

    cool!

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  2. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:24 PM

    i really like your story, it gives me a clear understanding of the picture you want people to paint in their head while they are reading the piece of text. i love it!!!

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  3. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:24 PM

    macarena^

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  4. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:37 PM

    I really like your story Chloe! I like you you were at the beach and you were getting really bored so you went down to the water and saw some jumping fish. I also like all the language you used.

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  5. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:46 PM

    Nice it was an enjoyable 4 minutes of my lifes.

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  6. UnknownJune 8, 2021 at 1:14 PM

    I liked the unexpected twist of a flying fish.
    awesome work Chloe!
    from Taylor

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