Tom - 4/6/21

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 The sky was dark, the evening red and orange sky drifted overhead as I was riding my bike home from a long day's work on the farm. Suddenly there lying motionless on the ground was a duck. It looked like it had only one wing. I swerved to avoid it and carried on my way back home. Then all of a sudden I heard a quack. Quick as a flash I jolted my head up into the night sky and there were lots of ducks led by the one with only one wing ‘…I didn’t realise they could fly!…’

Comments

  1. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:08 PM

    sounds cool

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  2. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:20 PM

    Good job tom keep up the good work it was fun reading it

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  3. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:21 PM

    This was a great piece of writing Tom I really enjoyed reading this.
    From Archie.

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  4. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:27 PM

    I liked reading this story Tom, It was interesting and had lots of cool descriptive language.

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  5. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:30 PM

    I really liked reading this... It is a great piece of writing!

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  6. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:35 PM

    Good work Tom! Keep up it up!

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  7. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:43 PM

    I really like your writing tom it was really interesting.

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  8. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:34 PM

    Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading through your writing; It was quite alluring and had lots of rich vocabulary. From John.

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  9. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:40 PM

    Good work Tom! Keep up it up!
    From James

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  10. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:49 PM

    Good work Tom!

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  11. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:50 PM

    Nice Tom

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  12. UnknownJune 8, 2021 at 1:16 PM

    Wow! This is full with amazing story elements and overall a good piece of writing! Keep it up!
    From Taylor

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  13. AnonymousJune 20, 2021 at 2:41 PM

    Thanks everyone.
    Tom

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