Tom - 4/6/21

 The sky was dark, the evening red and orange sky drifted overhead as I was riding my bike home from a long day's work on the farm. Suddenly there lying motionless on the ground was a duck. It looked like it had only one wing. I swerved to avoid it and carried on my way back home. Then all of a sudden I heard a quack. Quick as a flash I jolted my head up into the night sky and there were lots of ducks led by the one with only one wing ‘…I didn’t realise they could fly!…’

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  1. Good job tom keep up the good work it was fun reading it

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  2. This was a great piece of writing Tom I really enjoyed reading this.
    From Archie.

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  3. I liked reading this story Tom, It was interesting and had lots of cool descriptive language.

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  4. I really liked reading this... It is a great piece of writing!

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  5. Good work Tom! Keep up it up!

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  6. I really like your writing tom it was really interesting.

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  7. Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading through your writing; It was quite alluring and had lots of rich vocabulary. From John.

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  8. Good work Tom! Keep up it up!
    From James

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  9. Wow! This is full with amazing story elements and overall a good piece of writing! Keep it up!
    From Taylor

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