George 4/6/21

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 One beautiful day, I woke up and I thought, I reckon I’m going to go fishing. So I packed up my boat and jumped into my 2014 Toyota Hilux and headed out to the bay. I launched my boat from the boat ramp and then headed out to my number one spot to go fishing. On the way there I felt some bumps and I stopped a bit to see what was happening. Then I ignored it and kept going. I then felt one last bump before the boat launched into the air “I didn’t realise they could fly”.


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  1. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:15 PM

    Hi George
    I love your writing and the language you have used.
    Thanks Tom

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  2. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:21 PM

    Hi george I really enjoyed reading it and all the vocabulary that you use

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  3. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:42 PM

    Outstanding! It was an amusement reading through your writing; your topic was very fascinating and had some rich vocabulary. From John.

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