Eliza 8.5.21

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 If you are reading this you would be best to chuck it away and never think about it ever again. But if you decide to keep reading I might as well tell my story. It all started 3 years ago in 2018. I was in my house babysitting my baby sister while my parents were out for dinner. Everything was so peaceful and that was exactly when everything went wrong. As it went dark outside I suddenly heard someone pounding on the door. Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room, the door creaked open and people stepped inside and started their search...

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  1. Mrs HoranMay 12, 2021 at 1:21 AM

    Hi Eliza,
    Your writing this week really leaves the reader unsure of what has happened which is good for a short piece such as the 100WC. Keep up the great writing.
    Mrs Horan
    Team 100WC
    Morrinsville, New Zealand

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