4/6/21 - Taylor

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 In the cold mist of Antarctica, there are some birds known as penguins. I was looking around and I saw a lot of these critters, and all of them were known to be flightless. But there was one penguin trying to change that. He worked for hours to create a device that could boost him into the air. And then the penguin tried it. It was an ice jetpack. He turned it on, and I said “..I didn’t realise they could fly!..” but then, the flames of the jetpack melted the ice jetpack. I guess they can’t fly after all...

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  1. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:17 PM

    Cool story Taylor

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  2. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:18 PM

    └(^o^)┘awwsssooooommmme

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  3. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:39 PM

    Awesome! It was really fun reading through your writing; your topic was very interesting and your start really hooked me in. From John.

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  4. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:49 PM

    This story was interesting I liked the part about the penguin using an jetpack.

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  5. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:50 PM

    Great story! I like the part were fire melts ice.Stick man approves this story
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