Achie 4/6/21

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I thought it could be a lovely summer walk. Walking through these tall golden brown palm trees I could mistake myself for being in heaven, until I saw a horse flying ‘I didn’t realise they could fly!’  Where's my phone? I need a video of this so I could be social media famous. I will be a quintillionaire, I got my phone. Heyyy where did the flying horse go? Heyy there she is starting flying again. I need this fame. I could buy a humongous boat  that costs $800,000,000. That would be the greatest investment ever. Now fly!

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  1. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:07 PM

    Hi Archie
    I love the descriptive language that you have used to create such a great text.
    Keep writing Archie
    Tom

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  2. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 7:47 PM

    Excellent! It was really entertaining reading through your writing; your theme was very humorous and had lots of rich vocabulary. From John.

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