Chloe 12.6.21

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I woke up feeling like I had forgotten something, something important. What was it though? I know I didn’t know, until my mum woke. Then it hit me. It was Mother's Day, how on earth did I forget! There was only one problem, maybe more. I didn’t have anything to give her! Without saying anything I put my coat on and grabbed my dog, so I didn’t look suspicious. I started running almost too fast for my own feet. ‘Which way to the shops?’ it panted. Who was that? Were they talking to me? If so, was that my dog?

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  1. Mrswills1June 13, 2021 at 2:31 AM

    Greetings from Australia Chloe. Fancy forgetting Mother’s Day! You chose a situation that your readers could relate to. I loved the twist of something speaking, perhaps your dog. I always appreciate accurate punctuation, so I enjoyed reading your writing this week.🙏😊

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