Eliza 4/6/21

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I snuck through the forest trying to stay as silent as possible making one leaf rustle could ruin my chances. I was so excited. If I could get a good picture of a rare little spotted kiwi I could get the last of the money I needed to pay for my flight to Italy. I paused and listened carefully as there was the sound of rustling leaves. Creeping carefully forward, I found a clearing with a little spotted kiwi flying around in it. An excited whisper escaped my lips “I didn’t know they could fly!” carefully I raised my Camera.

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  1. AnonymousJune 7, 2021 at 4:21 PM

    Cool story Eliza, I really like how you used lots of descriptive language which made this story very interesting for the reader.

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  2. UnknownJune 7, 2021 at 4:27 PM

    This really good! I really like how you used lots of descriptive language....

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  3. UnknownJune 8, 2021 at 1:19 PM

    Really good! This was very interesting and keep up the good work!
    From Taylor

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